Brief 1: Body Shop

I have used my initial idea within these designs of using the picture behind the text, and although I thought maybe the second idea with the Natural Collection in a different font was better, it doesn't work as well on top of the photograph?! 

Although I do really like this design I'm not sure that it says anything about a feminine product as it is too bold.. I like the idea of the bark being used for an exfoliant however im not sure this works so well.